Many people don't really know what soldiers do. People think that it's about soldiers just going into the army to serve our country, but it's more than that.
Soldiers have to fight for their life's for ours and have to try and protect us while fighting. Serving in the army, is a tough job because soldiers go everyday without knowing if their going to die or not.
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This is how soldiers help others. Dare to reach out your hand into the darkness, to pull another hand into the light. ~Norman B. Rice
Like in Afghanistan, our American soldiers give out candy to the children. The soldiers have an important job that they have to do such as: protecting the civilians and looking for the threats to the civilians.
Before they can do that they have to train and go to work. Being in the army is more than just a job, it's a way of life.American soldiers are going to other countries to help their civilians and their government. our soldiers help train theirs so they will be able to protect themselves once the Americans go home.
Our soldiers help with distributing food and medical supplies. They talk with the civilians and help them in anyway they can.Sometimes there is gunfire in the streets and children may get hurt or killed. Our soldiers are there to protect them and try to get the bad guys away. Terrorists are the bad guys and they don't want the governments getting better or stronger. They are bullies and use weapons to get what they want.
That's why American and other NATO soldiers are sent to these countries. They are there to teach how to be better countries. Everyone has the right as human beings to live in a happy and peaceful life. This is our soldiers, in these countries.
I noticed that closer to the end the words got really small and harder to read. Also remember to add your commas Exp: Like my brother, they work many long hours.
ReplyDeleteI liked this post as well. As Casey said the words did get smaller and commas are not an option but for the whole post I liked it.
ReplyDeleteI really like your post a lot. I like the Army a lot and I give thanks for the ones who serve our country like your brother.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your post, Hannah. Other than a few grammatical errors your post is really good. Maybe try to focus more on non-personal issues, but otherwise I love it!
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